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Your title caught my attention, the pitch made me want to read the story and the prologue got me hooked. Reading chapter 1-3 confirmed my best expectations. This is a well-written story full of insights and amazing characters. Rachel distinguishes herself wonderfully. The setting made a big difference and you did a great job describing the different emotions of the characters. The compelling plot gave further credence to the quality of the story and the pacing made it a page-turner.

Janvier

Ok, here goes. First your pitch drew me in. Your prologue is brilliant and had me turning the digital page. I admit, I kind of got stuck right at the start of chapter 1...uh-oh, I thought, romance, Hollywoodish...for me, a no-no. However, I had promised to read, and thus continued. And now I am glad I did. Punchy scenes, swift action build, and the mysterious man in the background who comes to the rescue.

I am mightily intrigued. Is Rachel the woman in the prologue? Who is Paul? Where is this leading?

Very well done- you got me, after all!

Elaina

I read your prologue and first two chapters.

This is a compelling, compulsive read. Your plotting and execution are masterful. Your opening sentence is gripping, as is the entire prologue. You got me hooked.

Your deep characterization of Rachel shows me she's a sympathetic character who I would have no problem spending 400 pages with..

Your descriptions of people and places are suitable for the tone of your story. Not too much, not too little. I'm there 100%.

Your dialogue seems authentic and drives the story forward. No idle chit chat here. Your pacing is superb. Not a dull moment.

C A